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Llais Sais (sgwrs | cyfraniadau)
Crëwyd tudalen newydd yn dechrau gyda 'The article is slightly unclear about the relevance of the Ruthin premises. The cited reference says "He moved it to Denbigh where he developed it further." ...'
 
Llais Sais (sgwrs | cyfraniadau)
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Llinell 1:
The article iswas slightly unclear about the relevance of the Ruthin premises. The cited reference says "He moved it to Denbigh where he developed it further." but the way that "a'i ddatblygu" appearsappeared in the first sentence suggestssuggested that it could refer to the Ruthin premises before the move. I amhave going to attemptattempted to fix this; but please check afterwards in case I introducehave introduced any linguistic errors. I have also changed the last sentence to emphasise that this refers to the Denbigh premises, which I presume is the case as a web search for the Ruthin address suggests that this currently belongs to an insurance company. [[Defnyddiwr:Llais Sais|Llais Sais]] 12:2533, 28 Medi 2010 (UTC)
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